Six Audited Examples

Don't copy the message. Understand the derivation.

These six examples are the completed V1 audit cases. Each one starts with a real communication situation, identifies what must happen, diagnoses the Primary Friction, loads a Base Stack, and shows why the final message uses ENTRY → FRAME → LEVERAGE → CLOSE.

01 ATTENTION
02 TRUST
03 UNDERSTANDING
04 DESIRE
05 BUY-IN
06 ACTION
How to Read These
The useful question is not: “Which version sounds more persuasive?” It is: what was blocking the response, and what job did each position need to perform?
01
ATTENTION Audit

An important handoff update is getting lost in the group.

Everyday communication · read the update
Situation Internal team message / group chat
Observable Outcome READ
Desired Response ATTENTION
Primary Friction PRIORITY
Diagnostic rationale

The colleague knows what the handoff notes are, knows where to find them, and reading one update is not inherently difficult. The problem is that the message looks less important than the other things competing for attention.

Base Stack Default
Salience→ Curiosity→ Relevance→ Progress
Friction Adjustment + Final Situational Stack
Salience→ Curiosity→ Relevance→ Progress

No substitution. The ATTENTION default already contains mechanisms that fit the diagnosed Priority friction.

Before

I updated tomorrow's handoff notes. Please take a look when you get a chance.

After

One item in tomorrow's handoff note changed after today's call. It's the only step that now has a different owner. It affects the handoff you're leading at 9:00. The rest is unchanged — read the highlighted line and you're caught up.

ENTRY Salience

One changed item stands out from a generic document update.

FRAME Curiosity

The changed owner creates a small, legitimate information gap worth resolving.

LEVERAGE Relevance

The change is connected to the handoff the recipient personally leads at 9:00.

CLOSE Progress

Only one highlighted line remains between the recipient and being fully caught up.

02
TRUST Audit

You corrected an error. Now the correction itself must be trusted.

Everyday communication · believe the corrected file
Situation Internal team communication / corrected spreadsheet
Observable Outcome TRUST / USE THE CORRECTED FILE
Desired Response TRUST
Primary Friction DOUBT
Diagnostic rationale

The team understands the claim that the spreadsheet was corrected. The blocker is belief: after one version was wrong, why should the revised version now be considered reliable?

Base Stack Default
Transparency→ Specificity→ Proof→ Ownership
Friction Adjustment + Final Situational Stack
Transparency→ Specificity→ Proof→ Ownership

No substitution. The TRUST default already addresses Doubt directly.

Before

I found an error in the spreadsheet and fixed it. The new version is correct. Please use this one.

After

I found an error in the spreadsheet I sent this morning. Rows 42–68 were still using last month's rate, which affected the final total. I've corrected that formula and checked the revised totals against the source file; the validation tab now matches line by line. I've left the validation tab visible so you can verify any number yourself before using the file.

ENTRY Transparency

Admit the relevant error instead of minimizing or hiding it.

FRAME Specificity

Define exactly where the error occurred and what it affected.

LEVERAGE Proof

Support the correction with a concrete validation against the source file.

CLOSE Ownership

Give the recipient agency to verify the result rather than demanding blind trust.

03
UNDERSTANDING Audit

The information is present. The rule is still too easy to misread.

Everyday communication · understand the entry rule
Situation Volunteer event coordination
Observable Outcome UNDERSTAND / REMEMBER THE RULE
Desired Response UNDERSTANDING
Primary Friction AMBIGUITY
Diagnostic rationale

The actual procedure is easy. The problem is that the threshold, the two conditions and the corresponding entrances are buried inside one long explanation.

Base Stack Default
Cognitive Fluency→ Framing→ Contrast→ Micro-Commitment
Friction Adjustment + Final Situational Stack
Cognitive Fluency→ Framing→ Contrast→ Micro-Commitment

No substitution. The default already makes the rule easier to process, interpret, differentiate and verify.

Before

Tomorrow the main entrance will only be available during the initial arrival period because security needs to close it before the event starts, so if you arrive later you'll need to use the other entrance by the parking area. Please keep that in mind.

After

Tomorrow's entry rule is simple: arrival time decides which door you use. Before 8:30 = Main Entrance. After 8:30 = Side Entrance by the parking area. Quick check: if you arrive at 8:45, which entrance do you use?

ENTRY Cognitive Fluency

Reduce the rule to one governing variable: arrival time.

FRAME Framing

Define the issue as one threshold decision rather than several new procedures.

LEVERAGE Contrast

Put the two conditions side by side so the difference becomes obvious.

CLOSE Micro-Commitment

A small comprehension check makes understanding observable instead of asking “Got it?”

04
DESIRE Audit

The habit is understandable. It still does not feel worth doing.

Everyday communication · want the three-bullet handoff habit
Situation Internal team handoff habit
Observable Outcome WANT / ADOPT THE HABIT
Desired Response DESIRE
Primary Friction PRIORITY
Diagnostic rationale

The colleague understands the idea and can perform it. The missing condition is perceived value: leaving a handoff note does not yet feel important enough to compete with simply ending the workday.

Base Stack Default · v1.7
Relevance→ Aspiration→ Contrast→ Ease
Friction Adjustment + Final Situational Stack
Relevance→ Aspiration→ Contrast→ Ease

No situational substitution. This audit is the case that led v1.7 to freeze Contrast, rather than Anticipated Regret, as the general DESIRE LEVERAGE default.

Before

You should start leaving a short handoff note at the end of the day. It would make things easier for everyone.

After

You mentioned that the first 20 minutes of some mornings disappear just figuring out where yesterday left off. Imagine starting the morning already knowing what was finished, what is still open, and what needs attention first. Right now the morning starts with reconstruction. With a handoff, it starts with the next decision. It only takes three bullets: done, open, next.

ENTRY Relevance

Connect the habit to a problem the person already experiences.

FRAME Aspiration

Make the improved morning concrete enough to imagine and value.

LEVERAGE Contrast

Make current-state reconstruction and future-state forward movement easy to compare.

CLOSE Ease

Reduce the habit to three simple bullets: done, open, next.

05
BUY-IN Audit

The team understands the proposed format. One person sees only more work.

Everyday communication · agree to test a handoff format
Situation Internal team process proposal
Observable Outcome AGREE / SUPPORT A TEST
Desired Response BUY-IN
Primary Friction EFFORT
Diagnostic rationale

The colleague understands the format. The blocker is the expectation that adopting it will create another administrative process and more recurring work.

Base Stack Default
Reason Why→ Framing→ Consensus→ Micro-Commitment
Friction Adjustment + Final Situational Stack
Consensus → Ease
Reason Why→ Framing→ Ease→ Micro-Commitment

One substitution. Consensus does not solve the diagnosed Effort. Ease does.

Before

I think we should use a standard format for every handoff: owner, next step, and due date. It will help us stay organized. Can we start using it?

After

We're losing time after handoffs because the next owner and next step are often buried in the conversation. This isn't about adding another reporting process. It's just a three-part closing line: Owner → Next Step → Due Date. It takes one line at the end of the message — no form, spreadsheet, or extra update. Can we test it on this week's handoffs and see whether it removes the back-and-forth?

ENTRY Reason Why

Give the proposed change a concrete rationale before asking for agreement.

FRAME Framing

Reframe the idea from “new reporting process” to one structured closing line.

LEVERAGE Ease

Directly address the Effort friction by showing there is no new form, spreadsheet or update.

CLOSE Micro-Commitment

Ask for a bounded one-week test rather than permanent policy adoption.

06
ACTION Audit

The person can reply. The message makes them generate the answer from scratch.

Professional communication · schedule a 15-minute review
Situation Professional scheduling follow-up
Observable Outcome REPLY / SCHEDULE
Desired Response ACTION
Primary Friction EFFORT
Diagnostic rationale

The request is understandable and not meaningfully risky. The friction is open-ended work: the recipient must check a calendar, generate possible times, and compose the answer.

Base Stack Default · v1.7
Timing→ Reason Why→ Choice Reduction→ Ease
Friction Adjustment + Final Situational Stack
Timing→ Reason Why→ Choice Reduction→ Ease

No situational substitution. This audit is the case that led v1.7 to freeze Choice Reduction, rather than Risk Reversal, as the general ACTION LEVERAGE default.

Before

Hi Mark, Just checking if you had a chance to see my last message. Let me know when you're available.

After

I'm scheduling next week's review today. I just need to lock one 15-minute slot before I send the calendar. Would Tuesday at 3:00 or Thursday at 10:00 work better? Just reply Tuesday or Thursday.

ENTRY Timing

Give the follow-up a legitimate contextual reason to matter now.

FRAME Reason Why

Explain exactly why the reply is needed and what it enables.

LEVERAGE Choice Reduction

Remove the need to generate meeting times from an open calendar.

CLOSE Ease

Reduce execution to a two-word choice instead of an open-ended scheduling task.

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The Pattern Behind the Cases

The Trigger can change. The position job stays stable.

Across six different Desired Responses, the same four structural questions remain.

  • ENTRY Why should this person engage with this message in this context?
  • FRAME How should the situation, choice or meaning be understood?
  • LEVERAGE What legitimate mechanism changes the decision balance?
  • CLOSE What clear next movement converts readiness into action?
Use Examples Correctly

A canonical example is evidence for the method. It is not a script library.

Do not copy wording because it “sounds persuasive.” Start with the real Situation, Observable Outcome, Desired Response and Primary Friction. The Base Stack is a default. A substitution is justified only when the diagnosed Friction shows that another canonical Trigger performs that position job better.

The method structures legitimate information. It does not authorize fake scarcity, fabricated proof, false authority, deception, coercion, invented urgency or invented social evidence.

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Persuasion Trigger

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